Fanfic writer with a passion for exploring romantic relationships // Fandoms: Horizon Zero Dawn, Mass Effect, and Dragon Age // Fandom: Dragon Age, Horizon Zero Dawn, Mass Effect
Wouldn’t you be happier thinking I was a noble man? A Grey Warden? Instead of this. I would have saved you the pain of learning that all you knew about me was a lie.
Everyone’s saying that it’s just too good to believe Calling me foolish for falling in your gravity I got a word for that, and the word is jealousy Wishing they were you and me
So fuck it if they don’t like us ‘Cause I think we’re fucking righteous We’re out of our minds, we’re mindless But we don’t mind it Just telling the truth, ain’t nobody do it like us
Thanks for the tag @alyssalenko! I looove these writing memes! ❤️
Rules: go to page 7 of your WIP, go to the seventh line and share seven sentences. Then tag 7 more writers to continue the challenge.
I don’t have a lengthy WIP at the moment, so I went back to the last thing I wrote that was more than 7 pages long: my Abelas/Athera Lavellan post-Trespasser oneshot, in which Abelas visits Athera in a dream after two years of silence.
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“Athera.”
She froze instantly. That voice. That silken voice, she knew that voice – she loved that voice, she’d recognize it anywhere, and the treasured sound of it slammed the breath from her lungs.
A fuzzy ringing of unreality began to fill her ears. She finally dragged in a breath that rasped at the inside of her throat. “It can’t be,” she breathed.
Honestly… I’m also worried that Nil won’t be in the sequel, given that he can be killed. Guerilla released a really cool infographic on the one-year anniversary of the game which showed the percentage of players who spared vs. killed Nil, and Nil was spared in 54% of playthroughs.
That’s not much more than half the time… so I wonder whether the writers would be willing to invest time in continuing Nil’s mini-narrative or character development if he’s dead in half of the fandom’s playthroughs. (Keep in mind I’m not sure exactly how they obtained these stats, especially given that people have multiple playthroughs and even I killed Nil one time JUST TO SEE WHAT WOULD HAPPEN THEN I IMMEDIATELY RELOADED AND SAVED HIS FINE ASS OK)
That being said, it’s clear that the writers for his character had something intriguing in mind for his backstory. There’s his poetic vagueness about his past, and there’s Janeva having an odd degree of sympathy for him even though she clearly prefers the Old Way of Carja Justice (i.e. death sentence lol), and there are those soldiers who comment about him when you find him before the final battle:
Guard 1: Isn’t that… him? From the Battle of the Daunt? Guard 2: Can’t be. Cinnabar Sands was before that, and there were no survivors. Nil: Well, I don’t like to boast… Guard 1: Oh Sun, keep the Shadow from falling upon me.
TL;DR – I’m also worried that Nil won’t be in the sequel. However, I think there’s so much potential for him in the sequel, since there’s clearly more to him than meets the eye, and obviously I would love (L O V E) to see him show up.
And if he doesn’t show up, I’ll just host an online grieving party and we can all cry together.
WIP of Solas for a commission ヽ(゜∇゜)ノ I just lost this file so yeah, I guess I’ll have to start and sculpt it all over again. The Dread Wolf really took me q(❂‿❂)p WISHMELUCK